Monday, February 21, 2011

Yesterday's News


Rose petals
Baby's breath
Fallen from the trash
Lead crystal vase
Worthless treasure 
Laying on top of
Yesterday's news

My love lies in the alley
Ground into the pavement
By a trashman's boot

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I first posted this poem about 18 months ago when I had just a few followers. It received only two comments  (thanks Tim and Sarah)

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70 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:25 AM

    I was just telling a friend yesterday how just last summer I only had 4 followers (You, Rabbit, Jhon and Anthony) and how I missed my posse. Now we both have way more followers and the train keeps rolling..

    This poem is so sad.. I can see the broken vase, and feel the broken dream.

    Nicely done Pat!!!

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  2. Blue Wave 707February 21, 2011 at 5:30 AM

    Sadly, all flower arrangements must end up there ... nice black & white shot!

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  3. Joe CapFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:36 AM

    Good morning, Mr. Pat!
    I have not forgotten about you, just being lazy. I wanted to try to get in here and let you know I am still reading you, and praying that you are well and happy.
    Keep up with the great pics, and you are still on my radar!

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  4. Nevine SultanFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:47 AM

    What a lovely way to start my day. Thank you, Pat!

    Nevine

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  5. DawnFebruary 21, 2011 at 6:23 AM

    Lovely words, a wonderful poem filled with imagery. You have quite a few talents Pat!

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  6. BeritFebruary 21, 2011 at 6:46 AM

    You're clever Patrick, and this is a beautiful poem.
    Wishing you a warm and nice week.
    Greetings and a hug:)

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  7. Baby SisterFebruary 21, 2011 at 7:26 AM

    I love it. And I love the picture to go with it!! You are incredibly talented. :)

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  8. Pat TillettFebruary 21, 2011 at 7:41 AM

    Lynne - Things do change, that's for sure! Thanks Lynne! Casey Jones, you better watch your speed...

    Blue Wave - Yes, and sadly, sometimes when they are still fresh.

    Joe - Hey buddy! It's nice to see you here! I'm doing well and hope you are doing the same!

    Nevine - thanks so much Nevine!

    Dawn - And master of none of them! thanks Dawn.

    Berit - thanks so much! I hope your week is also a good one.

    Baby Sister - You are too kind! thanks so much!

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 21, 2011 at 8:05 AM

    So Pat, which came first -- the photo or the poem?

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  10. Bossy BettyFebruary 21, 2011 at 8:43 AM

    What a great poem, Patrick! You are fab, my friend. Glad I have gotten to know you a little through the blogosphere.

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  11. Brian's Home BlogFebruary 21, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    Very nice! The memories remain in the heart and mind!!!

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  12. Oilfield TrashFebruary 21, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    I always enjoy reading your poems Pat.

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  13. Alex J. CavanaughFebruary 21, 2011 at 9:16 AM

    You have a lot more now! That's powerful writing.

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  14. Martha ZFebruary 21, 2011 at 9:28 AM

    A sadness here and a story hinted at but untold.

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  15. Tess KincaidFebruary 21, 2011 at 9:40 AM

    Poignant write, Pat.

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  16. TS HendrikFebruary 21, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    That picture is so dramatic. That's the kind of shot I'd hang on a wall in a nice frame. Perfectly compliments such a fantastic poem.

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  17. Sally in WAFebruary 21, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    I felt such an aching sense of sorrow and rejection just reading it. Nicely written, Pat.

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  18. TaleiFebruary 21, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    Oh I love this! Great poem and excellent photo too.

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  19. Edie B. KuhlFebruary 21, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    Bittersweet. Love it.

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  20. baygirl32February 21, 2011 at 10:53 AM

    what a great poem Pat! and pic I might add

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  21. BelleFebruary 21, 2011 at 11:48 AM

    Wonderful poem!

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  22. ReeFebruary 21, 2011 at 12:14 PM

    Photo and poem together are awesome, and kind of sad.

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  23. Pat TillettFebruary 21, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    Karin - The photo came first. It was the total (almost) inspiration for the poem.

    Bossy Betty - Thanks so much! The feeling is mutual!

    Brian - Yes, they sure do! Thanks!

    Oilfield Trash - Thanks so much! I appreciate that...

    Alex - Yep, it almost bankrupt me to pay them all!

    Martha - Thanks! So true! That particular story will probably never see the light of day (on my blog).

    Tess - Thanks so much Tess!

    Tim - thanks so much! (for the comments both times!)

    Sally - Thanks! It always kinda gets to me also.

    Talei - Thanks so much for the nice words Talei!

    Edie - Thanks Edie! I appreciate it.

    baygirl - Thank you my friend!!!

    Belle - Thanks so much!

    Ree - Thanks Ree, I appreciate it.

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  24. Rawknrobyn.blogspot.comFebruary 21, 2011 at 1:05 PM

    That's very intriguing with wonderful imagery, Pat. I love the photo, too. It's a good match for the poem.
    xoRobyn

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  25. M PaxFebruary 21, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    Very depressing poem, but beautiful.

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  26. UnknownFebruary 21, 2011 at 2:43 PM

    Why? Why does your love lie there? Or am I taking the poem too seriously?

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  27. Ms. BeckyFebruary 21, 2011 at 3:07 PM

    you paint a vivid scene with your words, like a paintbrush on a canvas only better. I like this a whole lot Patrick. and the photo too.
    and thanks for visiting my blog and leaving me encouragement and support. It means a lot, especially coming from one with so much talent. have a beautiful evening!

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  28. ChuckFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    Another great shot and poem Pat. It must have been a while ago you posted it as I don't remember seeing in the last year...yup it's been that long already!

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  29. genieFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:35 PM

    Well, not only are you one photographer with my kind of sense of humor, but you are also a post. Just think, three talents for the price of one. You are just too good. I agree with Sally in that this shot belongs in a nice frame on your wall. Your composition is excellent and the picture is gorgeous. The poem say so much and is perfect as an accompaniment for the picture. Kudos!

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  30. JennyFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    Oh man. This is so poignant...and so often true.

    Glad you got more then two readers this time. It deserves thousands? Millions? Billions? Gajillions?

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  31. teresaFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:42 PM

    beautiful photograph

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  32. RebeccaFebruary 21, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    sad but beautiful then again love is beautiful but sad when forgotten

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  33. jcohen7523February 21, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    Was I one of those 2? This word jam gave me the chills.

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  34. carmilevyFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:16 PM

    You never fail to make me think. I'm so glad I've become one of your followers along the way. The world needs more thoughtfulness, and you provide so much of it.

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  35. Pam TuckerFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:29 PM

    Oh, I love your poem, Pat. And the photo is perfect for it.

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  36. Full-On-ForwardFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:32 PM

    I LOVE everything I've seen so far that you've written. This was a powerful visual!!!

    Good job Bro!

    John

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  37. Karen Jones GowenFebruary 21, 2011 at 5:40 PM

    Some big changes in 18 months Pat! So many people have discovered your creative talents and distinctive voice. I'm glad to be one of them. Great poem. But kind of sad following Valentine's Day, so glad I know that's not autobiographical.

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  38. Pat TillettFebruary 21, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    Robyn - Thanks so much! Hope you're enjoying Paradise!

    M Pax - thanks so much! I appreciate it.

    Clarissa - The rose petals and baby's breath represent "love." They fell out of the trash onto the ground and were ground in by the trashman! I guess it could have been my ex-wife...LOL!

    Miss Becky - Thanks so much for the nice words! I truly do appreciate it.

    Chuck - Thanks my friend! It was about 18 months. Where did this last year go anyway?

    Genie - Wow! Thanks so much Genie! That really makes me feel good! Also, thanks to you for commenting and signing up here! I really appreciate it.

    Jenny - Yep, it was true in that case. Long time ago, I'm happy to say! Thanks so much!

    Teresa - Thanks so much!

    becca - That is so true! Penthouse to outhouse!

    Jesse - Nah, you were ignoring me at that point...(JK) It was Tim (the non review) and Sarah (don't think you know her). thanks!!!

    Carmi - Thanks for the nice words. Also, for stopping by! Nice to see you!

    Pam - Thanks so much Pam!

    John - Thanks buddy! I appreciate that! I think I like about 75% of it.

    KarenG - Oh yeah! Many changes. I appreciate the nice words! It is a bit biographical, but from a long time ago. Thanks Karen!

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  39. MarleneFebruary 21, 2011 at 7:09 PM

    *sigh* Roses are so pretty. I hate to see them in the trash can. What a powerful photo...and poem.

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  40. N. R. WilliamsFebruary 21, 2011 at 7:30 PM

    It's a beautiful poem, Pat.
    Nancy

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  41. SarahFebruary 21, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    Love this. It's definitely worth re-sharing.

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  42. fayeFebruary 21, 2011 at 9:43 PM

    Like the photo and the poem..
    you must have posted this before
    moi ... I know you would have had
    3 comments for sure !! Now I
    am like number 40..

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  43. Pat TillettFebruary 21, 2011 at 9:58 PM

    Marlene - I sure hated to see those roses in the trash. It was a long time ago though... Thanks!

    Nancy - Thanks so much!

    Sarah - Thanks Sarah! of course you were one of the two first time comments. thanks for then and for now.

    faye - thanks so much faye! It was early on that's for sure. Thanks and have a good week.

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  44. SquirrelQueenFebruary 22, 2011 at 1:07 AM

    So beautiful but so sad, sometimes a love just isn't meant to be.

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  45. AnonymousFebruary 22, 2011 at 4:44 AM

    hi, new to the site, thanks.

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  46. Pat TillettFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:40 AM

    SQ - That is so true! Thanks!

    Anon - welcome aboard! Now, who are you?

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  47. Talli RolandFebruary 22, 2011 at 10:01 AM

    47 comments now, Pat! How far you've come.

    What a wonderful poem.

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  48. FranciscaFebruary 22, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    A sad poem of rejection and a broken heart. But sad also to see that gorgeous rose being trashed!

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  49. knot eyeFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    softly brutal...you handled this with a delicacy that belies the possibilities of pain

    FINALLY I visit...HA..you are a good guy to visit...I'm trying to be a good guy

    Peace, hp


    at the risk of appearing solicitous, I was trying something new


    http://hpicasso.blogspot.com/2011/02/form-monday-tankafeed-me.html#comments

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  50. Pat TillettFebruary 22, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    Talli - Thanks Talli! I appreciate it!

    Francisca - All is well, that ends well...

    hpicasso - thanks for stopping by and commenting (and for the nice words)

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  51. LeoviFebruary 22, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    A beautiful poem that nicely complements the picture.

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  52. UnknownFebruary 22, 2011 at 2:58 PM

    I remember once GIVING AWAY a bouquet of long-stemmed red roses an old boy friend sent for my 25th birthday. My love was long gone and so was he. Your poem screams of a heartless woman spurning your love and brought that memory all clearly back to mind. hmmm.

    Great job, as always, Pat.
    Rosemary

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  53. DumbFunneryFebruary 22, 2011 at 5:27 PM

    That's awesome about the bump in comments/followers - glad you are reposting some of your favorites.

    the phrase 'sad smile' comes to mind with this poem. sweet but sad.

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  54. One Woman's ThoughtsFebruary 22, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    Guess you've added a few friends since then.


    I felt the sadness from the words of your poem. I hope that you've had many better times of remembering love since then.

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  55. JimmyFebruary 22, 2011 at 8:28 PM

    Very Good Words Pat, just goes to show how someones feelings can be taken so lightly and thrown out like they were never there.

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  56. Pat TillettFebruary 22, 2011 at 9:31 PM

    Leovi - thanks so much Leovi!

    Rosemary - You hit it right on the head! I'm happy to say that it was a long time ago...

    Brad - thanks! it was a struggle in the beginning. I couldn't even get my family to look at my blog!

    OWT - Just a few! Oh yeah! Things couldn't be better than they are now!

    Jimmyu - Thanks Jimmy! Yup, and then ground into the pavement!

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  57. AnonymousFebruary 23, 2011 at 6:38 AM

    Such a sad poem, but such a lovely photo too. I love receiving flowers but it always makes me sad to see them eventually wither. - G

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  58. Rek SeshFebruary 23, 2011 at 12:08 PM

    Pity that seems to be the fate...loved the last three lines ...picture perfect....

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  59. JamesFebruary 23, 2011 at 12:59 PM

    What a powerful poem for a week after Valentines Day. :) I guess love can be like an ocean tide.

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  60. Pat TillettFebruary 23, 2011 at 3:01 PM

    Georgina - Thanks! My wife used to always hang them upside down to dry out. They keep their shape that way but kinda creeped me out.

    Rekha - thanks so much! I appreciate it.

    James - You got that right! It goes both ways! thanks James!

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  61. Pandorah's BoxFebruary 23, 2011 at 4:50 PM

    Just beautiful. And so true. And now look how many people commented.

    Keep them coming!

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  62. Living In Williamsburg VirginiaFebruary 23, 2011 at 7:55 PM

    Great photo and poem. That's the downside to cut flowers.

    Darryl and Ruth : )

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  63. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2011 at 6:46 AM

    thanks for this tips

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  64. Pat TillettFebruary 24, 2011 at 9:52 AM

    Kato - Thanks so much! I appreciate it!

    D&R - Yep, cut flowers and some relationships! thanks!

    Anon - Say What?

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  65. AnnaFebruary 25, 2011 at 1:10 PM

    A good poem always makes you want to know more. And now I'm dying of curiosity! Off to read the other comments to see if you left any clues...

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  66. Anthony J. LangfordFebruary 25, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    Come a long way in 18 months.. well done... and nice lil poem...

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  67. Pat TillettFebruary 26, 2011 at 1:19 AM

    Anna - thanks so much! I don't think you'll find too many clues!

    Anthony - Thanks Anthony! It seems longer!

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  68. RobinFebruary 26, 2011 at 9:29 PM

    Awesome photo and poem! I just lOVE hummingbirds!

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  69. Pat TillettFebruary 26, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    Robin - this is on the wrong post, but thanks! Me too!

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  70. SarahMarch 4, 2011 at 5:40 AM

    Yes, I do remember when you first posted this - a very vivid image that stuck in my mind, obviously.

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